Friday, January 27, 2017

WEEK 4: Meditative/Contemplative/Obsessive Essay



Writer/teacher Dave Hood defines the contemplative essay this way:


For many, a meditative essay explores an idea or topic. Typically, the writer asks an open-ended question—and then attempts to answer it in the  body of the essay. There is no definite answer to the question. Instead, the writer thinks out loud, pondering the question, writing down possible answers.  
For others, a meditative essay requires that the writer examine an object or emotion, seeking understanding through similes, metaphors, associations. The intent of the writer is to turn the abstract idea or the generalization of an emotion into an essay of concrete details that readers will understand and relate to. 
The meditative essay is not a narrative, and so there is no true or fictional story shared with the reader. Nor does the meditation focus on the self. And so it is not a personal narrative essay, which is based on a personal experience that results in an epiphany, and a universal truth. Instead the writer focuses outward on some idea, emotion, object—exploring possible answers. But there is no single, definitive answer.

I highlit the parts of this form I would like you to focus on this week. To fully invest in this meditation, you will need to do some research on whatever your topic ends up being. Research is broadly defined here--and can come straight from your laptop (but please keep track - in some form - of every place - virtual or otherwise - from which you gather info) or from more experiential or material sources (books, media, observation out in the world, interviews, etc.). This essay *should not* read as a story or a narrative (a collection of chronologically-and-character-linked events that are bound by a single event or concern). Instead, it is an exploration of a thing or idea that urges *your own personal and possibly obsessive* yet more open-ended investigation. You cannot escape yourself, but do not focus on your own experience as raw material here... instead your reader should encounter you in the way you gather and organize and link information. You-as-curator of accumulated/ing knowledge rather than you-as-subject.

Readings:



Melville on White (pp197-208)


John Cage on Silence (pp481-500)

Geoffrey Dyer On Photographs of Scarecrows: http://nyti.ms/2jxFyHQ


David Foster Wallace on the Lobster http://bit.ly/2kBV07x (super long but a CLASSIC and worth it to see how a remarkable mind can manifest in attention to things outside the self).

Thursday, January 19, 2017

WEEK 3: The Singular Moment


What makes a moment worth capturing? And then, how do we try to capture it? This is this week's concern. Choosing the singular moment/object/event is an essential consideration... and after that choice... that is where the real work begins.

Do we tell the importance of the moment by delivering it in full story mode? As EB White offers a trip with his son (p. 473-80)? 

Do we use internal monologue/imagined conversation to show how a moment works inside the mind as in Laura Riding Jackson (p 357-360)?

Will you describe your encounter with an object and let the object speak through you? As WC Williams-- (p 231-36)?

A play by play--chronological with dialogue and description and a single paragraph of existential horror embedded somewhere in the middle? As in Orwell-- http://www.george-orwell.org/A_Hanging/0.html

Do we write a philosophical meditation on a common occurrence to elevate and magnify the mundane into beauty? As in Woolf-- https://ebooks.adelaide.edu.au/w/woolf/virginia/w91d/chapter1.html



Whatever you choose to do-- consider using sensory detail and note (to yourself... take note... be aware of) where/how/how long you choose to spend time *with* the external moment and when you deviate through *speculation* and *meditation* or *association* to other times and places.




Friday, January 13, 2017

WEEK 2: Letters


The letter is one of the oldest forms of nonfiction rumination... it can be intensely private, filled with personal references that make the reader feel as if one is overhearing an intimate conversation replete with codewords and shorthand. Letters like this are mysterious and poetic and obscure as much as they reveal. Other letters feel like "open letters" --meant to be consumed by a larger audience than their single addressee (or kept for posterity... enlarging their audience through repeated readings... one person becoming several through different ages).
What letters share is that they are focused into their shape by consideration of the needs of their receiver. What does my son/daughter need to know about the world? How can I show my friend that my love for them goes deeper than they imagine?
If you haven't read it yet, Anne Bradstreet's letter to her son Simon--in its aphoristic delivery--is a type of sifting through life experience to find useful tenets that will serve him. The jump from subject to subject is telling of her selection-- (What can a *mother* give a son in the 17th century as advice?... what spheres do they share?... knowledge of people and how they work, mostly)
p. 9-14 in your book
Ta-Nehisi Coates's Letter to His Son (excerpted here is a *long* section from the book of the same name... give yourself the time to read the entirety of it... it is both painful and stunning) is focused by his distillation of personal and national history into a revelation for his child. The last sentence brought me to tears when I first read it. This excerpt is long for this class... but important.  Search for the through-line, the returned-to refrain. The body.
Rilke's Letters to a Young Poet (1903-8... translated from the German...read the first... but then as many as you wish for your own comfort) is an answer to a stranger's (an aspiring writer's) request for mentorship. Also advice, but delivered conversationally, with the intention of bolstering the artistic will.
Emily Dickinson's Master Letters (mid-1800s) are a different beast altogether... passionate and poetic outpourings of emotion to a friend or would-be lover or to God (a literary mystery even today)... they speak volumes about her (she refers to herself sometimes as Daisy in them)... the recipient's characteristics are less clear--but her emotional ferocity is palpable.
p. 221-24
Finally--this open letter shows the epistle-form's capacity for humor. (I will always try to show a form's ability to perform several functions). McSweeney's publishes open letters to odd entities... if you like, nose around on the site.
Your assignment-- Write a letter about something you care deeply about. I suggest you address the letter to someone/something larger than the present moment (a future or past self... a descendant years from now... a relative or friend who has passed... a deity... a dream... the sun, moon, or stars) but that is not a requirement. The only requirement is that the subject matter be a crucial one to you and that your 500-750 words be focused through your thinking about/toward/for the addressee. You can tell a story in the letter (Nehisi tells several) or not, but ask yourself what "change" you are going for in this piece... (the piece will necessarily serve double-duty by *seeming* private in its format but *being* public as a production of this class, written to be shared beyond its addressee as well as *to* them... social media should have you familiar with this conundrum). As always--email with any questions.

Tuesday, January 10, 2017

WEEK 1: Business Stuff

A - Steve | Lily | Ally | Bau | Kelly
B - Sean | Alexa | Victoria | Ian | Keara | Stephen
C - Allison | Harry | Sara | Joe | Miranda | Jadeh

1st Groups - Steve Sean Allison | Alexa Harry Ally Victoria | Bau Ian Sara |
                     Jadeh Keara Joe | Kelly Stephen Miranda




1ST Month + of Workshop Schedule

TUESDAYS
THURSDAYS

Jan 10th – Intro


Jan 12th – group (a) brings 18 copies of essay  

Jan 17th –  A workshop
group (b) brings 18 copies of essay  


Jan 19th – B workshop
group (c) brings 18 copies of essay  

Jan 24th C workshop


Jan 26th – DISCUSSION
group (a) brings 18 copies of essay  


Jan 31st – A workshop
group (b) brings 18 copies of essay  


Feb 2nd – B workshop
group (c) brings 18 copies of essay  



Feb 7th – C workshop


Feb 9 -- Discussion/Prep for PMA
group (a) brings 18 copies of essay  


WEEK 1: LIST ESSAY



WREAD the following list essays. Then write one of your own. 500-750 words. Create a thread to post it on blackboard under the WEEKLY DROP.
1. In The Making of the American Essay... up to 9-14 (Anne Bradstreet's "For My Dear Son Simon Bradstreet")--where she offers lessons in the form of aphorisms to her child/to the future/to a younger version of herself (what I wish I knew at your age)... a very good model for your first essay: A LETTER.
Then--
2. Sandra Newman uses the list for humor:
3. Meriwether Clarke uses lists to highlight research and juxtapose seemingly unrelated statements one after another to suggest a deeper relation:
4. In what feels like an homage to Allen Ginsberg's famous poem, Howl, Leonard Michaels tells the memoir of himself and a decade, showing how context and personhood are inextricable:
5. In these excerpts translated from the French of Frances Ponge's Soap-- one sees how any subject can become a list essay... commenting on daily life aphoristically/philosophically and its relationship to greater meaning:

Monday, January 2, 2017

1.2.2017 : SYLLABUS

c r e a t i v e  n o n f i c t i o n 
w r i t i n g  
 
: from Letter to Lyric Essay
& the wayward beasties inbetween


My Dear Friend, I send you a little work of which no one can say, without doing it an injustice, that it has neither head nor tail, since, on the contrary, everything in it is both head and tail, alternately and reciprocally. I beg you to consider how admirably convenient this combination is for all of us, for you, for me, and for the reader. We can cut wherever we please, I my dreaming, you your manuscript, the reader his reading; for I do not keep the reader’s restive mind hanging in suspense on the threads of an interminable and superfluous plot.  Take away one vertebra and the two ends of this tortuous fantasy come together again and without pain. Chop it into numerous pieces and you will see each one can get along alone. In the hope that there is enough life in some of these segments to please and to amuse you, I take the liberty of dedicating the whole serpent to you.
                                                                          —Charles Baudelaire, from his introduction to Paris Spleen

Course Description/Goals


What is genre?  What makes fiction fiction, nonfiction nonfiction, and prose prose?  What is an essay, a novel, an allegory, a fable, a memoir, a journalistic article, a meditation, a proem?  Why do we seek to categorize our production and what does such compartmentalization say about the critic, the reader, the author? What does it mean—in a world where publication meets market demands—to search for truth, to hold to it, to cleave (through fact) to fact? How does it make you feel when you understand that both "fact" and "fiction" are (etymologically) MADE THINGS? What does it meant to work towards/through/for truth so while straddling the fence, falling between cracks, reworking formulae, testing limits, pushing envelopes, resisting convention?  What does it mean not to?

In this class, you will be asked to produce several forms of nonfiction based on historical American models, first in several short exercises and then by expanding these pieces into (potentially combinatory) longer works. You will also read and analyze the works of (mostly but by no means exclusively) contemporary authors, and you will be asked to add your insightful analysis to the dialogue about what makes their work unique and/or meaningful. Once you understand why you like what you like and dislike about the pieces you read, you will be more capable of making distinctive choices about your own work. 
 
The different pieces we study for class, along with your classmates’ writings and your own, will provide fodder for discussion (probably), direction for your own writing (possibly), and will serve as stylistic models to emulate or to avoid emulating (almost certainly).

You will learn, by the semester’s end, how to gloss pieces of nonfiction, how to analyze them for use of voice, point of view, research strategies and approaches, narrative trajectory, and other formal elements.  By collaborating and working within the community of the classroom and the world at large, you will realize that none of these elements (nor indeed any writer or writing) function within a vacuum. This epiphany may be accompanied by a sense of great relief and/or great responsibility TO THE WORLD. I hope both.  Finally, you will both read and write more deeply by way of questioning and re-questioning, editing, revising and starting again from zero.  My responsibility as your instructor is to ensure that the recursiveness of such tasks not bore you. (I make no such promises regarding possible frustration.)


You will be graded on the quantity and quality of verbal and written feedback you offer to your peers as well as on an in-class presentation on a piece of nonfiction that MATERIALLY MOVED YOU TO NEW THOUGHT. You will complete TWO short response papers about on-campus/near-campus events/readings you are required to attend. (You will have a choice of several but also are encouraged to seek out others). You will submit an end-of-semester portfolio with substantial revisions of work you have done throughout the term. One option for this portfolio is the creation of a single segmented essay by weaving together several of your smaller pieces into a cohesive whole.

Course Texts and Materials


  • ·      The Making of the American Essay ed John D’Agata (available at the campus bookstore)
  • ·      Linked essays on the CLASS BLOG
  • ·      Handouts provided by the instructor… that would be me
  • ·      A place to keep those handouts (folder, envelope, microfiche…)
  • ·      A notebook that has no other commitments
  • ·      A working pen, pencil, crayon, stylus, laptop, etc.



Be prepared to provide hardcopies of your work for everyone in the class THE CLASS BEFORE YOUR WORK IS TO BE WORKSHOPPED.  No exceptions.

You are required to read in-depth, gloss and comment on your writing partners’ work (keep these, they will be turned in with the final portfolio.

Grades
Attendance and class participation will GREATLY affect your grade. Because we meet only twice a week and because the in-class work is ESSENTIAL to the successful completion of assignments—if you miss more than two classes (excused or unexcused), your grade will be lowered. If your frequent tardiness functions as absence, or you miss four classes or the equivalent in work, you will likely fail this class.

Use of Student Writing
It is understood that participation in this class presupposes permission by the student for the instructor to use any student work composed as a result of this course as classroom material.

Computer Use

Most of the work you do for this class will be handed in word-processed. Please use an easily readable font. Please. I grow old.

Use email to contact me about your coursework, or to ask any relevant questions. My email address is kjk42@drexel.edu

Computers are susceptible to crashing and freezing. I suggest handwritten drafts. Or, memorize your work as you go. If neither of these suggestions sounds feasible—Save your work frequently, always make backup copies, and plan your projects with extra time allowed for those inevitable glitches.